13 May, 2014

Mr Cricket

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15 comments:

  1. Anonymous15 May, 2014

    This photo is nice because it looks good.From Nick

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  2. Anonymous15 May, 2014

    Mr cricket is friends with Jad because mr cricket was to Jad and Jad was nice to mr cricket so now they are friend. From Paris.

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  3. Anonymous20 May, 2014

    i like mr cricit because he is butfull and hes got a brokin wing. from devin

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  4. Anonymous20 May, 2014

    I like the cricket because hi is really lovely. From Zach.

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  5. Anonymous31 May, 2014

    I like Mr cricket because he is kind and frendley the other thing is that he looks different then other crickets because he has a good brin but other crickets don't have a good brin like that. but the next day he died because other crickets took his food he tried to stop them but thay were to to strong the end by devin

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  6. Anonymous13 June, 2014

    I love you. I am crying. Sorry that you died. I miss you Mr cricket from Ethan.

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  7. I like Mr cricket because he was very nice to Jad when Jad found him the next day when Jad was going to look for Mr cricket Jad came up with a idea his idea was to make Mr cricket a house so Jad sent some people to look for Mr cricket until he made Mr cricket his houes when Jad was finished making Mr cricket's house he asked if they had found Mr cricket they said yes so they put Mr cricket in his house and we made sure that it had no spike things in it and no un-comfortable stuff in it and no hard things in it to and gave him lots of grass to eat and the grass was only for him so to make sure we all made him one door together and that was the end of my story by Devin made last night












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  8. one day when Jad and Zach and Laim and Devin were going to the field Jad found a cricket we named him Mr cricket then we all pulled some grass out for Mr cricket and put the grass in a corner and put Mr cricket in the same corner to were no one could find him the next early morning we all went to see Mr cricket but! when we were going to look at Mr cricket we saw him but! he was dead wonder who must have done this so we took him and looked at him and when we looked at him he was not alive so we put him back and sadly waked away to our class room and unpaked our bags and put our book bags in the trae and went out side the end by devin

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  9. I will always remember Mr Cricket.by Liam.

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  10. I like Mr cricket. By Devin

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  11. Bye bye Mr cricket. By Devin

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  12. Bye bye Mr cricket. By Devin

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  13. I feel very sad for Mr cricket. ethan

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  14. I like you Mr cricket

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